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Name: continued
Message:Also - postpone the bit about telling the mother - after all you wished that you had spoken out when Ria died so this contradicts it. You can imagine the conversation if you like - but don't do it.
I'd say that you should concentrate on helping Ria to hide the effects while at the same time trying to persuade her to give up. Let her drop some hints about the bullying also.
Dated:Mon Jan 30 12:47:07 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Nora: I think you are rushing along too fast - a typical fault in a beginner writer.

You have loads of material but you're trying to get it out in too much of a hurry.

Do a bit more about the party - and then when you come to the person in the hood do some sort of description where s/he can be recognised again. It could be an odd way of walking or a strange voice - something that you will be able to bring in when you bring your story to a close.

Dated:Mon Jan 30 12:46:33 2012  

Name: Nora-Murphy
Message:That's one of the best ideas ever Cora!!! The story sounds SO good now! Thanks SO much!
Dated:Sun Jan 29 21:14:47 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Nora: I've put it first so you should be able to find it - it's a combination of your three ideas.

James: Wolf was a very loved dog of mine and I'm glad that kids enjoy the book about him.

Rachael: Do you like living in Dublin?
Dated:Sun Jan 29 13:00:39 2012  

Name: james
Message:I LOVE your book wolf in the midnight forest
Dated:Sun Jan 29 12:09:18 2012  

Name: rachael
Message:im in dublin
Dated:Sun Jan 29 12:05:14 2012  

Name: Nora-Murphy
Message:the stories didn't come up on my computer but I'll try on my friends and see if it's on her computer. Thanks.
Dated:Sun Jan 29 09:02:58 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Nora & Minnie: I've put your stories on. Read critically and tell me what you think.
Dated:Sat Jan 28 18:55:32 2012  

Name: Nora-Murphy
Message:I changed my story to her best friend taking drugs and killing herself. I hope it's okay!
Dated:Sat Jan 28 13:31:55 2012  

Name: Minnie
Message:did you get my story, Cora?
Dated:Sat Jan 28 13:27:56 2012  

Name: Nora-Murphy
Message:Thanks Cora! They fit really well! I'll work on the story now.
Dated:Sat Jan 28 12:52:39 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Nora: I wonder about adding you bit about loneliness and bullying to your origrinal Halloween story - have a look and see whether they fit.
Dated:Sat Jan 28 10:55:23 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:I answered them straight away, MIchaela.
Here they are again:

Michaela's questions:
would you write another one of your books?
Not Drumshee ones.
Was it fun writing books?
Yes I enjoy it.
How did you get the idea of Titanic voyage? Seeing the film.
How many schools would you go to a year?
I used to do loads and this year, so far, I've done one and only intend to do one more.
Dated:Fri Jan 27 22:53:17 2012  

Name: michaela
Message:Will you be writing any more storys. Did you get all my questions
Dated:Fri Jan 27 20:39:10 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Lily: I'm more interested in the short story idea - I WISH I HAD LISTENED. I rarely like children's poems - the struggle for a rhyme always makes them sound contrived and insincere.

Any ideas yet? You could start with a list of 7 chapters - fill your seven pages.
Dated:Thu Jan 26 10:27:53 2012  

Name: lily
Message:do u like mi poem
Dated:Thu Jan 26 07:34:23 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Minnie: I love it - do keep within the limits of your age and your experience. Put down all of your dreams and don't try to pretend to be older than you are. Believe me, your feelings at the moment are unique and many an older writer would pay to be able to emperience them.
Dated:Wed Jan 25 18:12:20 2012  

Name: Minnie
Message:I've done a bit more of that writing like you said Cora and I included a twist.
Hope you liked it!
Minnie xx
Dated:Wed Jan 25 18:00:19 2012  

Name: aoibhe murphy
Message:Hi Cora

IN a Few munites i will write a story for you xxxxxxxxx
Dated:Wed Jan 25 17:22:16 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Congratulations to your teacher - what a great title.

With a title like that you must jump straight into the middle of the story - a family arguement, perhaps, or a warning from a teacher.

Jot down a few ideas on the story club form and I'll add a few more.
Dated:Wed Jan 25 08:55:22 2012  

Name: Lily
Message:Hey Cora, for school my english teacher wants us to write a short story about 7 pages with the title "I wish i had listened" do you have any ideas of what i could write about???
Dated:Tue Jan 24 20:14:59 2012  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Minnie: Keep going with what you have in this one. I think it is your best.

Taiane: Don't start looking for and ending. Really explore Mary Bennet' feelings and her thoughts about Jane and Elizabeth - and even Lydia. You have a lot of material there.
Dated:Mon Jan 23 17:55:49 2012  

Name: Taiane
Message:Fico muito feliz que você tenha gostado da minha história! Espero que eu consiga terminar... :)
Dated:Mon Jan 23 17:38:07 2012  

Name: Minnie
Message:Thankyou.
Oh wow, Charlotte Bronte didn't know anything about love?
My brother loves Wuthering Heights, he has read it about twenty times! I LOVE Jane Eyre it is a fabulous book.
Thankyou, Cora. Well, its just I have LOTS of experience of unrequited love you see, (well, its barely unrequited if I never asked any of them out but you see what I mean). And thankyou very much I will try and write a romance. I did start writing 'My Horse and The Rose' earlier last year but I think I just got bored. I dont know. Might unearth it again.
Hope you liked my piece of writing!
Minnie xx
Dated:Mon Jan 23 17:01:11 2012  

Name: Nora-Murphy
Message:Thanks Cora!
Dated:Sun Jan 22 19:42:17 2012  

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