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Name: Cora Harrison
Message:The story is working out really well. It's very tense and exciting.

Cillian & Sarah: When I have a little more time I will sort out your bits, but my first impression is that it all reads very well.

Sarah: Cillian is right; just start writing. You can send it to me in short chapters if you like. Did you read Ursula's story?
Dated:Mon Aug 22 18:13:11 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Sarah:
Thanks,
ut i'll think i'll leave it till some other people write some other bits!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 15:57:45 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cillian:Your not spoiling it!I've just read it & it makes the story really exiting.
Dated:Mon Aug 22 15:24:33 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:I added another bit on, I hope i'm not spoiling the story by adding alot of peices!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 15:18:20 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Actually, I did leave it in a bad place....
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:56:56 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cillian:I can't think of what to add on now so I'll wait for someonelse to add on something before I do.
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:54:46 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cora:Or how about you add a part before my last one about the three criminals heading for a stream that ran through the field & only seeing it at the last minute.Then the driver breaks but it's too late so the three of them hop out & try to escape on foot!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:50:12 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Sarah:
You made more sense!!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:46:00 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cora Harrison:Cillian just had the idea of you putting a part about the suv turning over before the last piece I added.I think it's a great idea.
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:43:40 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Dear Cora,
In the storyclub story, Sarah was writing a bit that was meant before mine but I finished my bit first (the bit were the main crimanal, kills the policeman) so it doesn't make sense, so before sarahs one could you put a bit were the suv topples?
I hope that made sense!!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:42:30 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cillian:That's a brilliant idea!Then it would all make sense.
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:36:35 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:We could ask Cora to put before your bit, something about the suv toppling?
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:28:17 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cillian:Okay.I just read your bit & it's great!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:27:12 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Its okay, Cora will fix it but i think it still works out
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:23:33 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cillian:Oops!My bit was meant to go before yours.Sorry!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 14:15:28 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Was that your addition it was good!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 13:53:17 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cillian:Thanks for the idea,I might do that some day.
Dated:Mon Aug 22 13:52:35 2005  

Name: Cillian
Message:Dear Sarah, I know you asked Cora but you should start your story and post it up on the website!
Dated:Mon Aug 22 13:49:33 2005  

Name: Sarah
Message:Cora Harrison:Hi Cora.I love your books. When I'm older I'd like to be a children's author or a journalist.I've always wanted to write a book,do you think I should start one?
Dated:Mon Aug 22 13:24:49 2005  

Name: Brittany
Message:Sorry Cora I hope i am not overwhelming you with too many stories
Dated:Sun Aug 21 18:29:36 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:I have just started a new story on the Storyline Board. I hope that lots of people will jooin in and that it will result in as good a story as we had the last time.
Dated:Sat Aug 20 18:08:05 2005  

Name: Brittany
Message:realy lol thats cool
Dated:Sat Aug 20 17:23:05 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:My mom has a small copy of the Blarney Stone. Whenever I have to speak in public, which isn't very often, she has me go upside down and kiss it. It feels sort of weird to be kissing a fake stone.
Dated:Sat Aug 20 16:08:32 2005  

Name: Brittany
Message:It was beautiful. Make sure to kiss the Blarney stone while you are there it gives you the gift of gab.When you are landing it is so amazing seeing all of the green green grass.
Dated:Sat Aug 20 04:53:30 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Brittany:
I would love to go to Ireland, but my family is so busy now. Maybe when I'm older and more sure of myself my parents will take me. How was Ireland when you saw it?
Dated:Sat Aug 20 03:29:22 2005  

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