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Dated:Tue Sep 13 15:27:23 2005  

Name: Alannah
Message:Cora: Did you get the 5th Chapter of my story that I sent to you a few days ago?
Dated:Tue Sep 13 15:26:57 2005  

Name: Eanna
Message:sorry, i meant september 10.
Dated:Tue Sep 13 15:25:01 2005  

Name: Eanna
Message:Im born on september 11.
Dated:Tue Sep 13 15:24:37 2005  

Name: Ursula
Message:Bridget; Hey you only know 1 person, I know 4 people in my town born on sep 11th like me.
Dated:Mon Sep 12 18:16:21 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:That's really neat, Ursula. I only know one person in Idaho who has the same birthday as me!
Dated:Mon Sep 12 04:01:41 2005  

Name: Ursula
Message:Bridget;
Hey
Your birthday is the same day as my godmother's cool!
Dated:Fri Sep 9 17:22:29 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Ursula:
My birthday is Wednesday the 21st.
Dated:Fri Sep 9 16:02:40 2005  

Name: Ursula
Message:hi cora
Thanks for the advice and for reading it again. I will listen into the lad's at school talking . Don't worry though the girls will come across some problems with the lads soon. I have a plan to interrupt the perfect life the girls have with their boyfriends and create some problems in the relationship perhaps David may see some one else and Mary finds out and something different will happen with June and Ryan.
Thanks again for reading it yet again!
Your help is what keeps me writing and editing!
Dated:Fri Sep 9 15:38:39 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Cora:
Thanks for the advice!
Dated:Fri Sep 9 15:16:54 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:I have an ending for it, but it's further along in the story. The story really starts when they're on the trip.
Dated:Fri Sep 9 15:16:25 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Competition:

Best-written review of one of my new books 'A Life for a Life' or 'Doomed to Die'. Don't forget to put your name, age, and school and post it to the Story Club.

Prize: Any of my books.
Dated:Fri Sep 9 14:33:15 2005  

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Dated:Fri Sep 9 14:07:05 2005  

Name: Alannah & Edwina
Message:Hi Cora,
We're in school now enjoying it!!
Any competitions?
Dated:Fri Sep 9 14:06:52 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Heather: I'm just putting your story on now. You are getting back into your stride, I think.

Ursula: I was reading through your story last night and I was thinking that the boys are not quite as good characters as the two girls. They seem a bit too good, if you know what I mean. Try listening in bit to boys' talk (not the bad language) and make them a bit moody on occasion - as teenagers are.
Dated:Fri Sep 9 10:33:57 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Bridget: I think that last message was for you, from Ursula - I've done that sort of thing myself a couple of times!

Your question is a very interesting one. I think why you are feeling slightly dissatisfied with your story is that it lacks a focus. When I do story writing in schools I always advise starting with a main character and then giving that main character a fairly serious problem to solve - this may be a moral dilemma, it may be physical danger, or it may be an impossible situation. The working out of this problem is what gives focus to the story and makes the plot of the story. If you work like this then you are forced to have the end of the story in view while you are writing the beginning and the middle bits.
Dated:Fri Sep 9 10:30:15 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hey we do our Junior certificate in the 3rd year of secondary school most people aged 14-16 when they do it. We also have exams at the end of every year but that one is a stae exam and is important for deciding what to do in the leaving certificate(The one before college) Thanks When is your Birthday mine is on Sunday the 11th.
Dated:Fri Sep 9 08:06:55 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Oops, I hit the 'Post Message' thing twice.
Dated:Thu Sep 8 22:06:18 2005  

Name: Bridg
Message:Hi Ursula:
When do you take your junior certs? In America we just have tests for every grade. And Happy Birthday!
Most of my family member's birthdays are in September, including mine.
Dated:Thu Sep 8 22:05:20 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Ursula:
When do you take your junior certs? In America we just have tests for every grade. And Happy Birthaday!
Most of my family member's birthdays are in September, including mine.
Dated:Thu Sep 8 22:05:02 2005  

Name: Heather
Message:Hi Cora
I sent you a chapter of my story, you can add that on instead of the other one, which was just a prologue! Thanks!
Dated:Thu Sep 8 20:14:35 2005  

Name: Ursula
Message:Bridget: I'm going to start writing some now but likely to add a chunk in about two weeks hopefully but maybe longer as I have some important days coming up, my birthday and my junior cert results day.
Dated:Thu Sep 8 20:11:16 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Ursula:
Do you know when more is coming on '2 Years of Mayhem'?
Hi Cora:
When I'm adding bits to 'The Marauders', I feel like I'm more telling what's happening than I'm showing it. Do you have any suggestions for making it better?
Dated:Thu Sep 8 18:48:43 2005  

Name: Ursula
Message:Bridget; Thanks very much, I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for letting me know !
Dated:Thu Sep 8 07:58:34 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Alannah, Bridget & Heather: Thanks for the stories. They are all on the Story Board now.
Dated:Wed Sep 7 20:20:32 2005  

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