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Name: Patricia
Message:I put the story in the board. Please help because there's something wrong with it but I don't know what.
Dated:Thu Dec 15 21:32:01 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Karen: I think that your story is going very well. What I would do now, if I were you, would be to imagine this other world - think of the details that would make different to our world - perhaps colours are different, buildings - how do they get around in their world and of course, most important of all, what is the threat to the netherworld which requires a champion. Just spend a little while thinking about this and thinking how the problem is going to be solved and then just go on writing it. It's great!
Alannah: I've put your next chapter onto your story.
Dated:Thu Dec 15 21:23:35 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Karen: I'm thinking about your story and will send advice as soon as possible.

Clara: I'm delighted that you liked GORGEOUS. Yes, of course, you can join the Story Club. What part of Ireland do you live in ?(just give the county).
Dated:Thu Dec 15 21:11:51 2005  

Name: clara
Message:Oh, thanks for the advice i wont put my address up anymore then. Ill add something as soon as i get time!!
Dated:Thu Dec 15 19:55:32 2005  

Name: Clara
Message:Hi I just want to say that Im finished gorgeous and Its now my favourite book! Its sooooo good!! well can I please join the storyclub?
Dated:Thu Dec 15 19:52:20 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Claire:
I'm sure you did great on the exams. We do similar exams here in the U.S., too.
Dated:Thu Dec 15 18:04:55 2005  

Name: Karen
Message:Thanks Cpra! i just submitted my story to the story club. just please don't put it on the story club un til it is finished
Dated:Wed Dec 14 21:59:37 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Claire: That was interesting - that is just the way that I learn. Something has to have a personal connection for me to memorise it. I used to find geography boring, though I loved history, but that was because I never personalised geography and didn't think of the people who lived in those countries and states that I was trying to memorise.
Patricia: Don't worry. It's quite natural for that to happen. I think the best way to tell the story is to imagine that you have a gang listening to you and you are trying to grab their attention and then to keep hold of it. If it would help, you could send what you've done to the Story Club and I wouldn't put it on the board or anything, but I could send you advice. Don't give up: you have talent.
Dated:Wed Dec 14 20:01:06 2005  

Name: Patricia
Message:Hi Cora, I started writing the story but it wasn't working as I was putting down way too much and I was leaving out more things. And I just gave up. I think the diary is too personal. Now I'm back at the drawing board and I don't know what to do. I know my ending its about the christmas exams and I will contiune it when the year progresses.
Dated:Wed Dec 14 18:21:20 2005  

Name: Claire
Message:Bridget Hi: I had a geagraphy exam today and I had to fill inplaces in the USA on a blank map. I had looked up you and Brittany last summer and that gave me an interest in it. I think I got everything right on the map.
Just off to put a bit on the story CU
Dated:Wed Dec 14 17:24:36 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi CLaire:
Sorry, I forgot. Good luck on the exams!
Dated:Wed Dec 14 16:11:59 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Claire:
Yes, I still come on here. I've just been busy for the past few days.
Dated:Wed Dec 14 16:11:01 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Claire: Good luck with the exams. Don't worry too much about them. You are only a first year. You have lots of time ahead of you before your leaving cert.
Karen: Just send the story to me and then I can give advice to you - if my advice is short then I can put it on this message board; if it's long I'll put it on the Story Board under the title of 'Advice for Karen'. Will that be OK?
Dated:Tue Dec 13 21:15:30 2005  

Name: karen
Message:thanks cora! just don't put it on the story board please because i need some help. i don't know what big problems are going to be in veronica's world and i don't know how sam and her are going to defeat it
Dated:Tue Dec 13 20:34:54 2005  

Name: Claire
Message:Hi Cora Soon be Christmas but first EXAMS!!!!

Hi Bridget do you still come here?
Dated:Tue Dec 13 18:56:15 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Clara: You don't need your email address -it's a bad idea to put that on the Internet, even a site like this one. Just go ahead and add to the story - even a couple of lines all makes it more fun for everyone.
Karen: Just go into the edit menu, click 'select all' then when it all turns black, click 'copy'. Then go to the blank space on the story book form and click 'paste'. It doesn't matter how long your story is the space will expand. When you have done your name and your school and your age, just click 'post story' and I will get it straight into my own email. When I get time I will post it on the Story Board.
Dated:Mon Dec 12 20:50:18 2005  

Name: Clara
Message:Hi this is my first time going on to this site. My names clara and I have just started reading 'Gorgeous' and i saw this site printed on the first page of the book. I am injoying the book so far and I injoy writing my own stories. I think i will add some to the story on the storyclub board. Could I join please?
Dated:Mon Dec 12 20:46:28 2005  

Name: Caoimhe
Message:Hi Cora Glad you had a good time in London. I'd love to go to London I imagine it all full of cool clothes.
I put a bit on the story.
Dated:Mon Dec 12 18:10:39 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Well, I am back from London and I had a great time there, but I found London very crowded and bit confusing. It is nice to be back in the peace of the countryside where the only noise you hear at night is the odd cow shouting for its calf. I'll get on to looking at the stories and messages as soon as possible.
Lovely to hear from Summer - I often think of you - also from Nicole. Yes, I do remember you at St Vincents.
Dated:Sun Dec 11 18:37:49 2005  

Name: Patricia
Message:Hi Summer,
What is phonetics? Why would I study it anyway?
Dated:Sat Dec 10 19:34:42 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Clara:
Go ahead and join the Story Club. You don't need an email address. Trust me, it's a lot of fun!
Dated:Sat Dec 10 17:32:40 2005  

Name: Brittany
Message:clara:you don't have to give your email address to join just go ahead and add your story to the story club
Dated:Sat Dec 10 17:26:26 2005  

Name: summer
Message:hi Patricia

Why English
I guess that you study phonetics
Dated:Sat Dec 10 12:58:16 2005  

Name: Karen
Message:Hi cora. sorry i haven't sent in my story yet. its very long and i don't want to write it out again and my mother dosen't know how to paste and stuff. SORRY!!!!!
Dated:Fri Dec 9 19:33:23 2005  

Name: Patricia
Message:Alannah: I have to admit I have always hated English and science, but when you go into secondary science is way better, trust me.
Dated:Fri Dec 9 18:19:50 2005  

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