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Name: Laura
Message:Hi Cora I got a book token from my godmother and I went into Limerick to buy Gorgous because all my friends tell me its great but I could'nt get it. Easons diddn't even have any of the Drumshee Chronicles either tho they had loads of your Drumshee Timeline but I have got all of them. I was sooooo disapointed that I had to buy something else. I bought the Princess Dairies but my friend says that its not as good as Gorgous.
Dated:Sun Dec 18 21:11:22 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Summer: Summer: I understand what you are saying about your theme being universal, but if you want to sell your novel you should give it a strong sense of place. This is what would interest your readers and what would make your novel different to many thousands of others with similar themes.
Dated:Sun Dec 18 19:25:35 2005  

Name: summer
Message: hi Patricia
Phonetic is general study of feature of the speech sounds
It is a little bit difficult as English is foreign language
Dated:Sun Dec 18 12:59:48 2005  

Name: summer
Message:
Hi core
I want to say that my story can happen in any place to any one in its feeling not necessary action. In my writing you can see my point of view about some thing maybe could not happen.
I try hard to learn English and to improve my language and vocabulary, for that welcome for any comment from any one.
Dated:Sun Dec 18 12:58:26 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Patricia: Write up the diary entry for the day before the first day at secondary school and send it to me through the story club and then I will think what should come next.

Alannah: I'm just going to put your latest chapter onto the Story Board. This is quite an exciting and intriguing episode.
Dated:Fri Dec 16 21:13:36 2005  

Name: Patricia
Message:Cora, I really thought there was something wrong. But like the first day was a shock I knew only the class and some of the boys. We were all really quiet, now we're loud and the hole time fighting. How do you think I could grab the reader's attention?
Dated:Fri Dec 16 18:24:10 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Patricia: I think that what is wrong with it is the first entry. That sounds rather boring. I think you should start with the day before and really describe your worries and your hopes for secondary school and also describe what your primary school was like. Try to grab your readers' attention.
As you get into your stride it becomes really, really good. I found it so interesting. Your style of writing is so straight-forward and honest. It's you, rather than an imitation Jacqueline Wilson.
Dated:Fri Dec 16 12:33:27 2005  

Name: Patricia
Message:I put the story in the board. Please help because there's something wrong with it but I don't know what.
Dated:Thu Dec 15 21:32:01 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Karen: I think that your story is going very well. What I would do now, if I were you, would be to imagine this other world - think of the details that would make different to our world - perhaps colours are different, buildings - how do they get around in their world and of course, most important of all, what is the threat to the netherworld which requires a champion. Just spend a little while thinking about this and thinking how the problem is going to be solved and then just go on writing it. It's great!
Alannah: I've put your next chapter onto your story.
Dated:Thu Dec 15 21:23:35 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Karen: I'm thinking about your story and will send advice as soon as possible.

Clara: I'm delighted that you liked GORGEOUS. Yes, of course, you can join the Story Club. What part of Ireland do you live in ?(just give the county).
Dated:Thu Dec 15 21:11:51 2005  

Name: clara
Message:Oh, thanks for the advice i wont put my address up anymore then. Ill add something as soon as i get time!!
Dated:Thu Dec 15 19:55:32 2005  

Name: Clara
Message:Hi I just want to say that Im finished gorgeous and Its now my favourite book! Its sooooo good!! well can I please join the storyclub?
Dated:Thu Dec 15 19:52:20 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Claire:
I'm sure you did great on the exams. We do similar exams here in the U.S., too.
Dated:Thu Dec 15 18:04:55 2005  

Name: Karen
Message:Thanks Cpra! i just submitted my story to the story club. just please don't put it on the story club un til it is finished
Dated:Wed Dec 14 21:59:37 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Claire: That was interesting - that is just the way that I learn. Something has to have a personal connection for me to memorise it. I used to find geography boring, though I loved history, but that was because I never personalised geography and didn't think of the people who lived in those countries and states that I was trying to memorise.
Patricia: Don't worry. It's quite natural for that to happen. I think the best way to tell the story is to imagine that you have a gang listening to you and you are trying to grab their attention and then to keep hold of it. If it would help, you could send what you've done to the Story Club and I wouldn't put it on the board or anything, but I could send you advice. Don't give up: you have talent.
Dated:Wed Dec 14 20:01:06 2005  

Name: Patricia
Message:Hi Cora, I started writing the story but it wasn't working as I was putting down way too much and I was leaving out more things. And I just gave up. I think the diary is too personal. Now I'm back at the drawing board and I don't know what to do. I know my ending its about the christmas exams and I will contiune it when the year progresses.
Dated:Wed Dec 14 18:21:20 2005  

Name: Claire
Message:Bridget Hi: I had a geagraphy exam today and I had to fill inplaces in the USA on a blank map. I had looked up you and Brittany last summer and that gave me an interest in it. I think I got everything right on the map.
Just off to put a bit on the story CU
Dated:Wed Dec 14 17:24:36 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi CLaire:
Sorry, I forgot. Good luck on the exams!
Dated:Wed Dec 14 16:11:59 2005  

Name: Bridget
Message:Hi Claire:
Yes, I still come on here. I've just been busy for the past few days.
Dated:Wed Dec 14 16:11:01 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Claire: Good luck with the exams. Don't worry too much about them. You are only a first year. You have lots of time ahead of you before your leaving cert.
Karen: Just send the story to me and then I can give advice to you - if my advice is short then I can put it on this message board; if it's long I'll put it on the Story Board under the title of 'Advice for Karen'. Will that be OK?
Dated:Tue Dec 13 21:15:30 2005  

Name: karen
Message:thanks cora! just don't put it on the story board please because i need some help. i don't know what big problems are going to be in veronica's world and i don't know how sam and her are going to defeat it
Dated:Tue Dec 13 20:34:54 2005  

Name: Claire
Message:Hi Cora Soon be Christmas but first EXAMS!!!!

Hi Bridget do you still come here?
Dated:Tue Dec 13 18:56:15 2005  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Clara: You don't need your email address -it's a bad idea to put that on the Internet, even a site like this one. Just go ahead and add to the story - even a couple of lines all makes it more fun for everyone.
Karen: Just go into the edit menu, click 'select all' then when it all turns black, click 'copy'. Then go to the blank space on the story book form and click 'paste'. It doesn't matter how long your story is the space will expand. When you have done your name and your school and your age, just click 'post story' and I will get it straight into my own email. When I get time I will post it on the Story Board.
Dated:Mon Dec 12 20:50:18 2005  

Name: Clara
Message:Hi this is my first time going on to this site. My names clara and I have just started reading 'Gorgeous' and i saw this site printed on the first page of the book. I am injoying the book so far and I injoy writing my own stories. I think i will add some to the story on the storyclub board. Could I join please?
Dated:Mon Dec 12 20:46:28 2005  

Name: Caoimhe
Message:Hi Cora Glad you had a good time in London. I'd love to go to London I imagine it all full of cool clothes.
I put a bit on the story.
Dated:Mon Dec 12 18:10:39 2005  

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