Name: | Aoife=) | |
Message: | Thanks Cora!!Da bookfair was 2day nd as u said dey only had da 2nd 1(dey had da third 1 but i read dat 1!!)my friend at scool said she has book1 nd anoder said she as book 2!!!so ill finally getta ta read dem!!!!Do u no if gorgeous 2 is out!!!??tanks!!xxxxxxaoifexxxxxxx | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 14 20:22:41 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Kristine: I still think that your teacher probably thinks highly of you, but is afraid that you might become big-headed and lazy. I would just keep on doing your best. Perhaps your mother or father might talk to her on Parent's Evenings and perhaps tell her that she is making you unhappy. Anyway, I think you are great and I've been a teacher for donkey's years! Aoife: You spell it OK, but I'm not too brilliant with text messaging so goodness knows how spell it when you are doing that! | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 14 16:12:50 2006 | |
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Name: | Aoife=) | |
Message: | Dats ok Cora!Dont hav 2 go 2 all dat trouble!!ANywaycora when u right "ok"do u right t in capitals or small?!Tanks!!! xxxxxx=)Aoife(=xxxxxx | |
Dated: | Mon Nov 13 19:00:29 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine | |
Message: | I'm sure it's not that. She actually really seems to despise me. She digs at me every chance she gets, she doesn't answer my questions in class and she picks at the tiniest mistake in my work, and it's only me she does it to. I haven't been able to work out why. | |
Dated: | Mon Nov 13 18:30:46 2006 | |
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Name: | Bridget | |
Message: | Hi Cora: I've just started doing this year's morning swim practice at 5:00. I went last year but I've been to busy this year. It will probably take me a few days to get back into the rhythm, though. I'm not quite used to getting up at 4:30 yet! | |
Dated: | Mon Nov 13 14:28:50 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Kristine: I wouldn't worry too much about your English teacher. It's very possible that she thinks she will discourage children not as talented as you are if she praises you too much. Have confidence in yourself and in your work. | |
Dated: | Sun Nov 12 20:30:23 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine | |
Message: | Hi Cora! I'm so glad you think I'm talented. Thank you so much!! My primary teachers did think so, but my secondary school english teacher just hates me for no reason and she's only been teaching me for two months. | |
Dated: | Sun Nov 12 19:12:58 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Carmel & Kristine: Thanks for your stories. I'v put them on the Story Board. Rianna: That was a great addition ot the Storyline. You write very well, indeed. I do think that the present story needs to be finished up soon, so if anyone has a good idea then I would be happy for them to put an ending on to it. | |
Dated: | Sat Nov 11 21:09:51 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine | |
Message: | Hi Cora. I've sent in two chapters of "Elementi" and I'm planning a sequel to "Bombshell" which I'm really looking foreward to starting - perhaps I'll wait until I'm a little deeper into "Elementi", though. xx Kristine | |
Dated: | Fri Nov 10 18:53:26 2006 | |
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Name: | Carmel Reeves | |
Message: | Thanks for reading my story I was thirteen when I wrote it but I'm fifteen now. i guess it needs some proof reading, thanks for the hints. I've sent in tow more storys one based on a poem and the other a short story be oscar wilde. I hope you like them. Carmel | |
Dated: | Thu Nov 9 20:55:51 2006 | |
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Name: | Jennifer | |
Message: | film-download-games-manager a | |
Dated: | Thu Nov 9 03:28:51 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Kristine: That would be great. | |
Dated: | Wed Nov 8 18:12:09 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | I've added in the references to the murderer. Shall I post it again as one file on the storyboard? xx Kristine | |
Dated: | Wed Nov 8 18:04:00 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | Hi Cora! I'll put in the references to the murderer just as soon as I get a chance, and yes, the title is Elementi. I've got to log off now, bye. | |
Dated: | Wed Nov 8 16:28:53 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Kristine: I think that the murderer should appear in the village street or something like that in the early stages of the story (and do mention his clothes). I've just read through your new story - it's great and I'll put it on the Story Board tomorrow. Is the title Elementi? Aoife: What book fair do you have? Is it Tara? If so, they usually have my books. If it is Tara then tell me the name of your school and I'll give the owner of Tara a ring and make sure that book 2 is there for you. She may not have book 1 as it is out-of-print. Aoife Trench: I'm looking forward to Eva's new adventures. I'm sure you will make them as funny and fast-moving as the first section. | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 7 20:24:41 2006 | |
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Name: | *~Aoife Trench~* | |
Message: | Hey Cora, I'm SOOO glad that you like my story!! And I've definitely thought of more stuff that I could put in to improve it!! And your idea of keeping a notebook to record things into it is really good! I'm TOTALLY listening to the other kids in my class these days! Lots of Love, Aoife. XxXx (",) (**,) | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 7 20:10:57 2006 | |
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Name: | Aoife=) | |
Message: | Hi Cora!!I Havent been on fer a good while!!I'm still looking fer ur 1st nd2nd books but we a book fair in scool next week so then they might have it!!BBYYYEEE!!!! Aoi=) | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 7 19:07:37 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | Hi Cora! I like your suggestion...I've never liked the name I gave the story, but I was stuck for a name so I just gave it the first name that came to mind. "Bombshell" sounds great. The references to the murderer sound good too, but what kind of references could I put? xx Kristine (",) | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 7 16:11:50 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Kristine: I've just put the last chapter of 'The Bomb' on the Story Board. It's a great ending. I've written a little suggestion at the end - let me know if you think it's a good idea or not. | |
Dated: | Tue Nov 7 14:54:38 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | Hi Cora. Just read your message properly and realised you were talking about the storyLINE and not my story. Sorry 'bout that. | |
Dated: | Mon Nov 6 19:20:04 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | Hi Cora, I'd thought of that - don't worry, I'm finishing it up in the next one or two chapters. xx Kristine | |
Dated: | Mon Nov 6 19:15:47 2006 | |
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Name: | Cora Harrison | |
Message: | Sorry, everyone! I had a problem yesterday and couldn't get at my computer. I feel quite excited about the excellent writers that are now on the Story Club. A lot of talent out there! I'm glad you solved your problem, Kristine - and that's a great new entry on the Storyline. Perhaps one of the others would contribute as well. I think this story needs finishing up soon as when they get too long, no matter how excellent they are, people find it difficult to pick up the threads. | |
Dated: | Mon Nov 6 14:57:37 2006 | |
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Name: | *~Aoife Trench~* | |
Message: | Hey, Cora, Are you sure you're talking about MY story?? Cos there are thousands of Aoifes' on this website! I'm glad you liked the story, I'm looking forward to when I see it in the Story Club. I'm thinking of turning it into a book when I'm older and I'm working on the sequel. I only have about 4 or 5 pages done but I'll see if I can finish it around February or March next year!! Lots of Love, Aoife. XxXx (",) (**,) P.S: I can't wait 2 read Carmel's story too!! | |
Dated: | Sun Nov 5 18:22:35 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | Hi Cora. Just noticed your comment on Chap. 9. Or was it Chap. 8? I'm not sure. No, I haven't shown it to anyone. I don't ever show my stories to anyone, unless I'm writing it for school or for a fanfiction website, which I don't very often. We don't do much creative writing in school nowadays (we did it every week in Primary school). The rest of my stories I keep in locked folders on my desktop. I don't really like to talk about my stories to people who don't know anything about them. I'm afraid they'll say it's stupid, which often they do. | |
Dated: | Sun Nov 5 16:23:06 2006 | |
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Name: | Kristine Niland | |
Message: | Hi Cora. I'm having real trouble with writer's block!! I'm trying to force myself to write chapter 10, but all of my ideas just seem so crappy ('scuse the language!)!! Can you help? Please! | |
Dated: | Sun Nov 5 15:12:59 2006 | |
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