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Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Aoibheann: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

I've been interested in the lists - I've read a few Jacqueline Wilson books - was very impressed by the first one that I read where a girl was in touch with her best friend who was killed in an accident - but less so with many of the later ones which I felt were rather lazy and re-using plots and characters.
I haven't read Stephanie Meyer, but am aware of what a phenomenon she is. Have read Jodi Curtin and thought them good - have never heard of Chris Higgins - male or female?
Dated:Tue Feb 10 09:23:45 2009  

Name: Aoibheann
Message:Cora: I'll be 11 Tomorrow!
Dated:Mon Feb 9 18:17:24 2009  

Name: Sarah Patton
Message:Cora:My Favourite authors would be, You, Chris Higgins, Jacqueline Wilson
Dated:Sun Feb 8 19:44:05 2009  

Name: Kristine
Message:Cora: I have a seriously changeable list of favourite authors, but my top three right now are Sarah Dessen, Stephenie Meyer and Louise Rennison. Apart from that, there’s a pretty extensive list.
Dated:Sun Feb 8 14:48:45 2009  

Name: Aoibheann
Message:Cora: I have a very long list of favourite authours, some of the top are,
Jacqueline Wilson
Judi Curtain
Marita Colin McKenna
Lauren Brooke
You
And J.K Rowling,
But that is only some,
SaraH:
I hope you like it!
Dated:Sun Feb 8 10:56:58 2009  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:I think it would be more interesting for you all to make a list of your favourite writers - I would be interested to look at that. I suppose my favourite writers would be people writing for adults - like Jane Austen!
Dated:Sun Feb 8 10:03:55 2009  

Name: Sarah Patton
Message:Cora :I imagined the cottage something like that!!
Aoibheann:yes I will read your story .a.s.a.p
Dated:Sat Feb 7 21:30:06 2009  

Name: Aoibheann
Message:Cora: Thats a good idea,
Kristine: Thanks!
Dated:Sat Feb 7 14:04:31 2009  

Name: RIONA
Message:who are your fav writers Cora??? mine are marita conlen mckenna,jacqueline wilson and YOU!!!
Dated:Sat Feb 7 11:08:11 2009  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Krisitne: I agree with you. The growth in the main character is what makes the difference between a good story and unsatisfactory story.

Aoibheann: You were right; chapter nine had disappeared! I've reinstated it, but before anything else happens, take a copy of the story (just highlight, copy and then paste it into a microsoft word document) If I were you I would polish it up (make sure that Rainbow is always spelled with a capital letter) and also check that all the details are correct. And perhaps have something like two weeks go by when Skye and Rainbow or good friends, and then Rainbow reads the letter...
Dated:Sat Feb 7 09:15:46 2009  

Name: Kristine
Message:Aoibheann: I really like your new story ending, I really like how Rainbow changes as a person throughout the story!
Dated:Fri Feb 6 22:37:51 2009  

Name: Aoibheann
Message:Cora: I like it, But Mabye it's just my computer but I can't see chapter 9..
Dated:Fri Feb 6 21:43:45 2009  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:aoibheann: Have a look and see what you think.

Sarah Patton: I'm sure Aoibheann would be interested in how you think her story has turned out.
Dated:Fri Feb 6 20:20:38 2009  

Name: Aoibheann
Message:Cora: Yeah, Looking over them a bit, It's best to turn it in to chapter 10.
Dated:Fri Feb 6 19:53:49 2009  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Aoibheann: I hope you don't mind if I say that I don't think chapter ten works. Chapter nine, where she finds the poem, works really well and chapter eleven is excellent, but chapter ten really doesn't fit in. It's unbelievable- all those fast and unexplained recoveries and all the blood - it is not just unbelievable, it is totally unnecessary. I would advise just turning chapter 11 into chapter 10 and then leaving that as a an ending. Think about it - but that's my advice.
Dated:Fri Feb 6 19:48:42 2009  

Name: Aoibheann
Message:Cora:yeah the chapter 10 you got is the real one.
Dated:Fri Feb 6 16:36:11 2009  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Thanks, Sarah.
Riona: That sounds as if it will work well.
Aoibheann: Chapter 11 arrived - and I think it's great - a wonderful ending. Well done! Do I have the final version of chapter 10? If so I'll put it all together later on today.
Dated:Fri Feb 6 09:53:37 2009  

Name: RIONA
Message:she only has one close friend and gets bullied i'll add more of the story later i have a good few chapters written including 'the classroom' and 'the coach' where she gets bullied. what you think?
Dated:Thu Feb 5 21:03:03 2009  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Aoibheann: No, not yet - it will probably come at about midnight.
Sarah Patton: I think that you will make a better story if you keep to one of the options. The important thing is to make it real by describing how your main character is feeling. Yes, I do live in that cottage. I describe it in the Famine Secret and also in millennium@drumshee (it's a bit draughty in this weather - but we do have a modern extension tucked out of sight!)
Riona: I think a school tour is a great idea for a story. It might be best to have the class go to a very old building - an old castle perhaps. The girls bed down together in a dormitory - and then when midnight comes...
Dated:Thu Feb 5 20:01:44 2009  

Name: sarah
Message:you,jaculine wilson &judi curtain are my fav authers
Dated:Thu Feb 5 19:59:55 2009  

Name: RIONA
Message:is anyone writing a book or any one finished one
Dated:Thu Feb 5 18:37:22 2009  

Name: RIONA
Message:Cora i have just posted some of my first chapter. please write back and tell me what you think.
Dated:Thu Feb 5 18:32:55 2009  

Name: RIONA
Message:Mellenium at drumshee- it was great!
Dated:Thu Feb 5 18:18:08 2009  

Name: Sarah Patton
Message:I was just reading the section that says "Biography" on this website.Do you really live in that gorgeous cottage???
Dated:Thu Feb 5 18:14:32 2009  

Name: Sarah Patton
Message:Cora:I have been thinking about the short story it is not due until next tuesday, but I would like to get all my homework for next week done before the weekend, and I have got tests on Tuesday so I will be studying for them on Monday night.I think I will just stick to one of the ideas for the story maybe just do a fight between them or maybe just stick to the part where she gets ill.And then if I wnt to afterwards I will make one big great story with both the ideas.What do you think.
Dated:Thu Feb 5 17:50:57 2009  

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