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Name: Lily
Message:Cora, did you get the second chapter??
Dated:Sun Dec 11 11:03:33 2011  

Name: Taiane
Message:Um poema.
O cisne.
Um ponto se havia na neve
Quando vi, eis que surge,
Um cisne, machucado em sua pele.

Se houvesse uma cor,
Nesta triste manhã de domingo,
Mudaria, tiraria se tivesse, toda dor.

O sangue que havia,
Na doce, branca, límpida neve
Uma música surgia.
___*___
Nota: Este poema também faz parte do começo da história e depois disso vem o baile, mas tenho que fazer algumas mudanças, então depois que estiver pronto te enviarei.
Dated:Sat Dec 10 19:41:21 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Put it on the Story Club, Taiane. It's on the home page at the end of the line of pages.
Dated:Sat Dec 10 19:41:20 2011  

Name: Taiane
Message:Obrigada, Cora! Que bom que você gostou do começo e obrigada por me dar dicas... Mas eu já tenho uma continuação da história, só que não deu para pôr aqui, já que é um pouco grande e tem alguns poemas. Vou tentar pôr as próximas partes!!
Dated:Sat Dec 10 19:36:15 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Taiane: I've put your story on the Story Club Board. Have a look!
Dated:Sat Dec 10 18:04:03 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Aoibhe: There's 'Death of a Chimney Sweep'. I've dedicated that to my grandson, Shane. I think you met him on the beach at Lahinch.
Dated:Sat Dec 10 18:02:34 2011  

Name: aoibhe murphy
Message:hi cora do you have aney new story books out for christmas that i can read and print!
Dated:Sat Dec 10 13:29:09 2011  

Name: Taiane
Message: Poucos se importam com o que eu faço. Se é que alguém se importa. Acho que a única pessoa que sentiria saudades de mim seria meu piano. Treino muito, mas as pessoas não veem a beleza das notas. A música é muito mais sincera do que as pessoas. Assim como os livros.
Minhas irmãs acham que a coisa mais importante na vida é se casar com rapazes bonitos e ricos. Mas de que tudo isso vale se não serão felizes? Pelo menos, eu não seria. Mas, talvez, elas serão felizes só de conseguir aquilo que queriam. Lizzie pensa o mesmo que eu. Mas diz que se casaria, mas por amor. Penso comigo; ‘Será que existe amor neste mundo?’. Talvez se os bailes fossem lugares para conversas edificantes e boa música, existiria. Uma dança pode não mudar nada.
Dated:Sat Dec 10 13:22:40 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:send it to me in Portuguese and I'll do my best!
Dated:Sat Dec 10 12:31:15 2011  

Name: Taiane
Message:Só se eu traduzisse em algum site da internet... Mas o inglês não ficaria muito bom, mas acho que você entenderia. Only if I should translate into some internet site ... But the English would not be very good, but I think you understand.
Dated:Fri Dec 9 18:44:05 2011  

Name: Minnie
Message:Oh thanks Cora and if you have a cold I understand I didn't mean to pressure you to put it on right away :-) thankyou for putting it up when is your new book coming out?
Minnie xx
Dated:Fri Dec 9 18:18:36 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:To be honest, Taiane, I'm not good with Portuguese. I would be guessing half the time - no chance of having it in Enlgish, is there?
Dated:Fri Dec 9 17:56:10 2011  

Name: Taiane
Message:Será que eu poderia te enviar uma parte do que eu escrevi, Cora?
Dated:Fri Dec 9 16:03:31 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Minnie: It's on now. I've had a bad cold for the last few days and have been in bed working with my netbook - odly enough sometimes when I think I put a story on then it doesn't work with that little gadget.

Anyway, it's on now.

Lily: Well done.
Dated:Thu Dec 8 20:07:05 2011  

Name: Lily
Message:Second chapter complete!
Dated:Thu Dec 8 20:04:45 2011  

Name: Lily
Message:Hey Cora........my teacher loved the first chapter!!!
Dated:Thu Dec 8 19:13:42 2011  

Name: Minnie
Message:Heya Cora,
Did you get my story? I wrote it out for you I hope you got it
Bye bye
Minnie :-) xx
Dated:Thu Dec 8 18:28:07 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:That's a very good idea, Lily.

Make a list of chapters and what is going to happen in each one of them.

I'd say that if you have three months in which to do it, then you could have about ten chapters. Think of it like a journey through lots of vilages or towns and decide what is going to happen at each place (or chapter).
|I still think that the materia in the second paragraph should be gradually woven in rather than just presented in one chunk. If you do this you risk boring the readers.
Think of Harry Potter (if you have read these books) you need something new happening all of the time.
Dated:Wed Dec 7 20:35:03 2011  

Name: Lily
Message:I have decided that what is going to happen in my novel is that i will see a woman who looks like my mother getting on a train and i will follow her and in the end it will turn out to be my long-lost sister
Dated:Wed Dec 7 19:57:12 2011  

Name: Lily
Message:Cora, the chapter i sent you is instaed of the essay, we have three months to make a short novel and that is the first chapter of it. I mixed it in with my life a bit
Dated:Wed Dec 7 19:55:06 2011  

Name: Lily
Message:Hello Cora, i am workingon a novel for a competitiion in school and i would like you to see what i have done so far, i have one chapter done and i will post it A.S.A.P
Dated:Wed Dec 7 11:32:59 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Minnie: I've put on your story - apologies for the delay. I'm really looking forward to reading how you are going to tie up all the loose ends and bring the story to a satisfying conclusion.

It is so important to have a good ending, otherwide your readers feel let down and disappointed.

Lily: That's too wide a subject - I couldn't pick something for you because I don't know what you're interested in. People only write well when the subject interests them.
Dated:Fri Dec 2 16:16:45 2011  

Name: Lily
Message:I have to write an essay for school. It can be on any topic, but i cant work off one!!! Can u give me some topic ideas??
Dated:Thu Dec 1 18:34:01 2011  

Name: Minnie
Message:That's okay Cora! I could understand your life must be pretty tiring. I am going downstairs now for Veggie Burgers (I am a vegetarian) and roast potatoes and pepper. Yum! Hope you have a nice relaxing evening, then
Minnie :-) xx
Dated:Thu Dec 1 18:30:52 2011  

Name: Cora Harrison
Message:Minnie, I will do your story tomorrow. Today was hectic I was trying to do three thousand words and I was exhausted when I finished.
Dated:Wed Nov 30 21:24:04 2011  

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